Yengwa's Reviews

[Sonic's Weekly Life]

Slow and boring

Why is Sonic so slow?

[S.O.A.D Loop]

Snowblind

The name of the song is Snowblind, it's a cover of a Black Sabbath song.

With that out of the way...

Wow, I'm surprised this passed judgement. Nice. But I don't think it should have. Theloop isn't good, the graphics are terrible and they don't look like they are playing their instruments at all. And where's Serj?

Whenever it showed the bassist or guitarist there was a second or so gap where they were just standing there not playing. Look at real instruments and musicians to learn how they play their instruments so this doesn't look like crap.

Static responds:

=)

[The Nearness of You]

Good

That was nice. It was simple and fun and not OMFG KILL EVERYTHING!!! So I enjoyed it. I thought that the little squigglies jumped around really quickly, too quickly. And the stick figures at the end moved away choppily.

I don't like how you assumed we are stupid and "wouldn't get it" so that lessened your score a bit. Otherwise, nice job.

TheKingOfNot responds:

I was more thinking that I didn't do a good job getting it across. but sorry to offend, i'll change that.

thanks for the review

[Image Gallery Photo Album]

Fix this

Your pictures are strechy. Make them the proper proportions please. And don't move the controller around all over the screen. That's annoying. Keep it in one spot.

Jdid112 responds:

You are right I will keep this in mind, that's a good constuctive review!

[Traffic Control 2]

Wow

That's very cool. Very original. I love it. I think the control is very intuitive, which isn't something that I see on Newgrounds very often. I can tell you put a lot of thought into it. I really love this game.

Some improvements: The graphics could be improved some more. They're good enough, they aren't distracting and everything looks right, but they could be better.

Also, I think you could make it harder and more complex if you add in turning cars, and the player has to deal with arrow lights too. I think if the cars could crash into each other, then you should lose points or something. Also, maybe some sounds. Sounds for the cars, and a sound that plays to let you know that the queue is building up. I got a game over out of nowhere, and I was confused for a second. Oh, and I loved the music. Absolutely perfect for this game.

Maybe add some more levels, like after you get a certain score on one level, you move on to a harder level. With more cars, lights, different cars, stuff like that.

I really love this game, and I think that adding in these things could really improve it a lot more. I definately think this is front page material. Great job.

[Game: Star Wars]

Not Bad

This is kinda fun, I guess.

Your 3D TIEs need some work. They aren't very accurate. Also, I wish the mouse wasn't so sluggish, it's hard to hit fast moving TIEs when your cursor moves so slow. I also wish that I could see my laser shots so I can know that I'm actually shooting or not.

Good try though.

[The Labyrinth is on Fire|| LoZ]

That's awesome.

I fucking love Zelda and metal and this is one of the coolest metal Zelda songs I have ever heard.