Well, it's too long.
I didn't really like it. I watched the first on and this one suffers from the same problems. It's really slow. And long. And kinda boring. There's a lot of superfluous scenes in it. And the animation is really limited. The characters hardly ever move and when they do I can tell you try and not show the legs to avoid walk cycles. Come on man, put some more work into it and the animation could be great.
I think if you clean it up some more and get rid of some of the scenes and cut out a lot of the fluff where nothing happens at all you could really have something great. Make the scenes shorter and make them really pop. I wanna see quick, snappy, clever jokes. Some of the jokes were funny but I didn't really laugh because I was falling sleep.
I'm only being so negative because this could be really great. I love Zelda and I think you're really onto something awesome. I love the style and I love the idea, but the execution is only par at best and sub-par at worst. I hope the next one will have some of these ideas in it. Looking forward to it.